Jaret's Zanpaktou

*Can Still Be Read but New Zanpaktou Idea has been posted more recently!*
Basically I had an idea for my zanpaktou, I talked to an admin about it who said it may be do-able, but I got told by alot of people that I should tweak it, and I also believed it as well. So both ideas are going to be posted in this edit, the original and the tweaked version. Tweaked is first and below that is the original.

Name: Regulus

Call : Control the Heavens!

Appearance: A sword which is bent back alittle bit more then normal zanpaktous, and has a hilt with a star inside of a oval shape.

Zanpaktou Spirit: A werewolf that has a fiesty attitude, he often attempts to encourage Jaret to realize his true potential along with telling him about his limits. The werewolf often wears a leather jacket to hide his chest, which is a image of space. Stars and and galaxies can be seen within his chest as if he was a portal to space itself.

Ability In General: Regulus is connected with the universe, specifically nature, he can help to change the way Jaret's reiatsu is. Regulus can suck in the reiatsu from the surrounding landscape/objects around him as long as they have their own reiatsu and not a persons in their make up. With regulus's ability to suck in the reiatsu in the area around him he can create a "zone" if you might say that is equivalent to the power that is being put out from what Jaret has taken in. This zone increases Jaret's awareness inside of it, In Example the zone can expand 20 feet in all directions, it's basically a circular dome of reiatsu that can't be seen, but can be felt. In this zone Jaret is able to react to things greater, and is given increased re-acting capabliites and his speed is increased. With Jaret's connection to nature he can feel everything thats done in his zone as if he was literally apart of it. In a way Jaret has 360 degree vision when he is inside of his "zone"(Called a zone because a name has not been thought of yet), as long as Jaret has his eyes closed he can see everything around him, although extremely intense reiatsu often causes him to have to open his eyes because he can sense it at an increased rate in his zone. THe only draw back is that exteneded use puts extreme strain on Jaret's body depending on how long he uses it or how much energy he out puts.

Shikai: In shikai the use is simple, it can create a zone ranging to about 20 feet out from the center, Jaret. In the zone Jaret would be able to react much faster, and is alot more nimble then usual becuase he is literally connected to everything around him. Because of the fact that Jaret is connected with nature and their reiatsu are shared as one he can use the reiatsu of the surrounding objects to increase his speed/strength and other attributes in battle such as strength of kido and shields alike.

Bankai Abilities: In bankai the only thing that would change is that Jaret's range is increased to 50, he has better control over the reiatsu he inputs and outputs but he can only sustain it for about 10 minutes. After the 10 minutes are up he has to either release his bankai and suffer extreme exhaustion. Or pass out from over use of his powers.

This is the edited version of my zanpaktou, if you want to see the original look below



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Ability In General: Regulus is connected with the universe, specifically nature, he can help to change the way Jaret's reiatsu is. Regulus can suck in the reiatsu from the surrounding landscape/objects around him as long as they have their own reiatsu and not a persons in their make up. With regulus's ability to suck in the reiatsu in the area around him he can create a "zone" if you might say that is equivalent to the power that is being put out from what Jaret has taken in. This zone increases Jaret's awareness inside of it, In Example the zone can expand 20 feet in all directions, it's basically a circular dome of reiatsu that can't be seen, but can be felt. In his zone Jaret can control the forces that are applied on all matter in the universe. Such as Gravity, Inertia, Compression, Pressure, Wind Resistance, things like that. The only problem is the more intense, and important the force the more of an effect is has on Jaret's body. The use of controlling it literally strains the reiatsu in Jaret's body to such an extent that it literally begins to tear him in two. So prolonged use of the zone, along with the intensity of the force being used causes more strain on Jaret. Jaret his "zone" has an increased awareness, especiallly when he closes his eyes, because he has a type of control over everything in the area he could react faster to things because everything seems to slow down when his ability is active.

Shikai: In shikai the use is simple, it can create a zone ranging to about 20 feet out from the center, Jaret. In the zone it can control simple forces like inertia ( Anything in motion will stay in motion), so if someone was to come charging at Jaret and plan to stop right infront of him, he could make him keep moving so he misses his intended location. He can also control wind resistance (The force that is applied on everything that moves causing it to slow down). SO if Jaret were to say remove this from an object it's speed would triple, or if he were to increase it it's speed would decrease. He would also be able to control gravity to a low extent. He would be able to slow down objects and increase the weight of something making it harder for someone to lift, or if it was used on the person for someone to move. The limits of his shikai are great so that he wouldn't be able to do TOO much with his shikai, limiting him to only being able to increase somethings weight by say 30 pounds, or being able to only give so much wind resistance to slow down something going 50 mph to make it go only 30 mph.

Bankai Abilities: The bankai would be a total release of Jaret's abilities to control the forces, he would be able to control gravity, inertia, wind resistance, compression, and pressure at his own risk. If Jaret wanted he could increase the gravitational pressure on ones body so much that it crushed them, but applying so much weight , or the attempt to apply that much power to it could imobilize/kill/hospitalize him. [b]

Kinda' god-modded. Really, the whole concept of a 'type' is something such as an element or attribute, such as posion, water, fire, dark, etc... Nature is fine. Universal control is not.

Also, it isn't fair that everyone can obtain Bankai. For crying out-loud, powerful people such as Aizen and others never achieved bankai. But... it's nicer than most others. And you seem to be a very good roleplayer, from my POV. So... I believe that this zanpakuto is fine.

This is seriously OP. Your shikai has control over too many things and has too many abilities. Choose one, and focus on a shikai for that if you're going to make a custom.

Darwin Blake wrote:Kinda' god-modded. Really, the whole concept of a 'type' is something such as an element or attribute, such as posion, water, fire, dark, etc... Nature is fine. Universal control is not.

Also, it isn't fair that everyone can obtain Bankai. For crying out-loud, powerful people such as Aizen and others never achieved bankai. But... it's nicer than most others. And you seem to be a very good roleplayer, from my POV. So... I believe that this zanpakuto is fine.

Thanks for your opinion, I really thought the same thiing as you, except when it came to bankai. I'm not sure if you're right, unless I don't remember i'm pretty sure EVERYONE can obtain bankai some just haven't. But it doesn't need to have a bankai, thats why I simply just wanted to know peoples opinion, also why I haven't even used my shikai yet do to the fact i'm not sure if it will be accepted.

Lance/Ransu/Tsumetai/Leon/Aero declares this- Bye, I think I smelled a cake. :O